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The chart show that time spent on two devices according to various categories. Describe the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart show that time spent on two devices according to various categories. Describe the main features and make comparisons where relevant. bYrp3
The two pie charts depict the percentage of time spent on smartphones and tablets as per 6 different categories of software, ranging from games to social networking, utilities, and several others. At first glance, it is clear that there are three categories for each device that make up the bulk of the time spent using them; the remaining three categories for either smartphones or tablets account for roughly a quarter of their usage. In greater detail, gaming makes up about a third of the time people spend on their smartphones while the same purpose accounts for more than a half of people's time on tablets. However, when it comes to social media apps smartphone users spend twice as much time with these softwares than tablet users, at 30% of the total. Furthermore, there is a significant difference in the use of time for utility apps between these two devices at 20% and 3% respectively for smartphones vs tablets. Conversely, apps for music and videos are used 5% more for tablets than smartphones at 13%. News apps make up a small proportion for both devices at just 3% and 4%. The remaining small amounts of time are made up by using other various apps. In summary, it can be seen that the majority of time users spend on these devices is for entertainment, gaming, social networking, and music and video.
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categories of software, ranging from games to social networking, utilities, and several others.

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that there are three categories for each
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that
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up the bulk of the
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spent using them; the remaining three categories for either smartphones or tablets account for roughly a quarter of their usage.

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spend on their smartphones while the same purpose accounts for more than a half of
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on tablets.
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5% more for tablets than smartphones at 13%. News apps
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is for entertainment, gaming, social networking, and music and video.
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IELTS academic The chart show that time spent on two devices according to various categories. Describe the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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