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THE CHART SHOW INFORMATION ABOUT EMPLOYMENT RATES ACROSS SIX COUNTRIES IN 1995 AND 2005.

THE CHART SHOW INFORMATION ABOUT EMPLOYMENT RATES ACROSS SIX COUNTRIES IN 1995 AND 2005. pKRd3
THE BAR CHART ILLSUTRATES THE RATE OF EMPLOYED POPULATION IN SIX REGIONS(AUSTRALIA, SWTIZERLAND, ICELNAD, UK, NEW ZEALAND AND USA) FROM 1995 TO 2005. OVERLL, THE POPULANCE OF MALES IN 2005 SHOWS THE HIGHEST RATES OF EMPPLOYMNET WHEREAS, THE NUMBER OF FEMALES IN 1995 IS THE LOWEST REGARDLESS OF DIFFERENT NATIONS. IT CAN BE CLEARLY SEEN THAT, IN AUSTRALIA THE PERCENTAGE OF MALE IN 1995 AND 2005 IS 55% AND 68% RESPECTIVELY. IN CONTRAST, THE PERCENT OF FEMALES IS AROUND ONE FOURTH IN FIRST YEAR AND AROUND 38% IN FINAL PERIOD. AS FAR AS SWITZERLAND IS CONCERNED, THE PERCENTUM OF MEN IN 1995 IS ACCOUNTED FOR 66% AND IN 2005 IT IS STATED AS 78%. WHILE, THE FEMALES IS STATED AS56% AND 67% ACCORDINGLY. IN ICELAND, THE EMPLOYMENT RATE SHOWS AN IDENTICAL DIFFERENCE FOR GENTS IT IS 12% WHEREAS, IN WOMEN IT IS 10%. THE BAR CHART FURTHER COLLATE THAT, THE PERCENTAGE OF WORKING MALES IN 1995 IS ALMOST SIMILAR IN UK, SITZERLAND AND USA. MEANWHILE, THE POPULANCE OF GENTS IN LAST PERIOD IS 55% AND AROUND 60% IN USA AND SWITZERLAND. LADIES EMPLOYING RATES FLUCTUATES IN THESE NATIONS.
THE BAR CHART
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ILLSUTRATES
THE
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RATE
OF EMPLOYED POPULATION IN SIX REGIONS(AUSTRALIA,
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SWTIZERLAND
,
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ICELNAD
, UK, NEW ZEALAND AND USA) FROM 1995 TO 2005.

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OVERLL
, THE
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POPULANCE
OF MALES IN 2005
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RATES
OF
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EMPPLOYMNET
WHEREAS, THE NUMBER OF FEMALES IN 1995 IS THE LOWEST REGARDLESS OF
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DIFFERENT
NATIONS.

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CLEARLY
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THAT, IN AUSTRALIA THE PERCENTAGE OF MALE IN 1995 AND 2005 IS 55% AND 68%
RESPECTIVELY
.
IN CONTRAST
, THE PERCENT OF FEMALES IS AROUND ONE FOURTH IN
FIRST
YEAR AND AROUND 38% IN FINAL PERIOD. AS FAR AS SWITZERLAND
IS CONCERNED
, THE
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PERCENTUM
OF
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MEN
IN 1995
IS ACCOUNTED
FOR 66% AND IN 2005 IT
IS STATED
AS 78%. WHILE, THE FEMALES
IS STATED
AS56% AND 67%
ACCORDINGLY
. IN ICELAND, THE EMPLOYMENT
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RATE
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SHOWS
AN IDENTICAL DIFFERENCE FOR GENTS IT IS 12% WHEREAS, IN WOMEN IT IS 10%.

THE BAR CHART
FURTHER
COLLATE THAT, THE PERCENTAGE OF WORKING MALES IN 1995 IS ALMOST SIMILAR IN UK,
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SITZERLAND
AND USA. MEANWHILE, THE
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POPULANCE
OF GENTS IN LAST PERIOD IS 55% AND AROUND 60%
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AND SWITZERLAND. LADIES EMPLOYING
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RATES
FLUCTUATES IN THESE NATIONS.
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