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Describe the changes between 1990 and now

Describe the changes between 1990 and now BwJnm

The maps illustrate the differences of a university sports court between 1990 and now. Overall, some places have changed now, also some areas have stayed unchanged. First of all, on the left of the maps, while in 1990, there was a park and a car park, now they are instead of a basketball court and a tennis court. Additionally, Outdoor pool was by a Indoor Pool. The changing room has moved to the right, and behind a Fitness Centre is constructed.

The maps illustrate the differences of a university sports court between 1990 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. Overall
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 places have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
, also
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 areas have stayed unchanged. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 of the maps, while in 1990, there was a park and a car park, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 they are instead
 of a basketball court and a tennis court. Additionally
, Outdoor pool was by Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 Indoor Pool. The changing room has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to the right, and behind a Fitness Possible spelling mistake. 'Centre' is British English.Center
Centre
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. 

IELTS academic Describe the changes between 1990 and now

Academic

American English

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81 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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Lexical Resource: 6.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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