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The chart reveals the rate of New Zealand population between 1950 and 2050. Overall, it can be seen that the percentage of population growth in four age groups was unsteady.

The chart reveals the rate of New Zealand population between 1950 and 2050. Overall, it can be seen that the percentage of population growth in four age groups was unsteady. lL67W
The chart reveals the rate of New Zealand population between 1950 and 2050. Overall, it can be seen that the percentage of population growth in four age groups was unsteady. The age group with the highest percentage increase was over 65. In 1950, the rate was 60 percent, and it rose slightly to 70 percent in 1990. But since 1990 there was a slight and steady decrease of the population and it is predicted to continue by 2050. Age group with the second highest percentage increase was 38 to 45. In 1950, the number was roughly 25 percent, it experienced a dramatic growth and hit 50 percent in 1990. The percentage of population this age group then dropped slightly to 40 percent in 2000. After 2000, it’s projected to remain unchanged by 2050. The remaining two age groups had lower percentage of population growth were 25 to 37 and 0 to 14, which started at roughly 20 percent and 5 percent, respectively, in 1950. The percentage of age group 25 to 37 decreased slightly, sink 10 percent in 1990 and stayed the same to 2000. It’s predicted to decline by 2050. In contrast, age group 0 to14 remain unchanged by 1990. After that, it tended to increase steadily and it’s expected to reach 20 percent by 2050.
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was unsteady.

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with the highest
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increase was over 65. In 1950, the rate was 60
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, and it rose
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in 1990.
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2050. Age
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with the second highest
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increase was 38 to 45. In 1950, the number was roughly 25
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, it experienced a dramatic growth and hit 50
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in 1990. The
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then dropped
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in 2000. After 2000, it’s projected to remain unchanged by 2050.

The remaining two
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had lower
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growth were 25 to 37 and 0 to 14, which
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25 to 37 decreased
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in 1990 and stayed the same to 2000. It’s predicted to decline by 2050.
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0 to14 remain unchanged by 1990. After that, it tended to increase
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IELTS academic The chart reveals the rate of New Zealand population between 1950 and 2050. Overall, it can be seen that the percentage of population growth in four age groups was unsteady.

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