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The charts show the age at which people left full-time education as well as the average salary they were making two years after entering the workforce. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts show the age at which people left full-time education as well as the average salary they were making two years after entering the workforce. e5Dax
The pie chart provides information about the proportions of leaving schools, which are not part-time types of schooling, at the same time the bar chart has been elucidated that when students quit academic purposes, their earning money substantially in 2 years. Overall, the group of pupils, who are aged 19 to 21, have possessed the largest area in the former data, on the contrary the classification has not had the highest cash in the latter knowledge. Furthermore, the youngest children do not leave the institutions, which accounted for 3%, as well as the most similar category is called “after 24”, which contributed 6% on the data. Therefore, both classifications, that are named 22 to 24, also 16 to 18, are provided nearly the same data, that are just under twenty, and over fifteen respectively. On the other hand, the income is earned the most by the group of the second oldest humans, which is around 24 £. However, The lowest salary has been gained by the column of before sixteen, roughly 16£.
The pie chart provides information about the proportions of leaving schools, which

are not part-time types of schooling, at the same time the bar chart has
been elucidated
that when students quit academic purposes, their earning money
substantially
in 2 years.

Overall
, the group of pupils, who
are aged
19 to 21, have possessed the largest area

in the former data,
on the contrary
the classification has not had the highest cash in the latter knowledge.

Furthermore
, the youngest children do not
leave
the institutions, which accounted for

3%,
as well
as the most similar category
is called
“after 24”, which contributed 6% on the data.
Therefore
, both classifications, that
are named
22 to 24,
also
16 to 18,
are provided
nearly
the same data, that are
just
under twenty, and over fifteen
respectively
.

On the other hand
, the income
is earned
the most by the group of the second oldest

humans, which is around
24 £
.
However
, The lowest salary has
been gained
by the column of
before
sixteen, roughly
16£
.
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IELTS academic The charts show the age at which people left full-time education as well as the average salary they were making two years after entering the workforce.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
172 words
6.5
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