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The bart chart compares the proportion of British residents consuming fruit and vegetables everyday in three years namely 2002, 2006, and 2010. Overall, it is clear that the proportion of women who ate fruit and vegetables was on top, compared to men and children. The opposite was true for that of children. All these figures showed a slight fluctuation from year to year. In 2002, with 25 percent, the figure for women was higher than that of men, stood at 22 percent. At this time, the figure for children was two times less than those of children. Four years later, the proportion of women eating fruit and vegetables reached a peak at 32 percent before falling back to 26 percent in 2010 but it was still the highest. In 2006, In comparison with the percentage of British men consuming fruit and vegetables, which saw a increase of only 4 percent than 2002, the figure for children rise of 7 percent. At the end of the period, the proportion of british men and children witnessed a slight decrease to 24 percent and 18 percent, respectively.
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of British residents consuming
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everyday in three years
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of women who ate
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and
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was on top, compared to
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. The opposite was true for that of
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. All these
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showed
a slight fluctuation from year to year.

In 2002, with 25
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, the
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for women was higher than that of
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, stood at 22
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. At this time, the
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for
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children
was two times less than those of
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. Four years later, the
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of women eating
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and
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reached a peak at 32
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in 2010
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, which
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rise of 7
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witnessed a slight decrease to 24
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IELTS academic proportion of British residents consuming fruit and vegetables everyday

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