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The graph below shows the amount of money spend on a book NH Ramani France Italy and Australia in between 1995 and 2005

The graph below shows the amount of money spend on a book NH Ramani France Italy and Australia in between 1995 and 2005 7aOqk
The line chart illustrates, the expenditure on a book in three different place Germany, France, Italy, and Austria in between 1995 and 2005. Information measured in $ US dollar (Millions). Overall, as we can see that expenditure of books was a dramatically increase till 2005 in a four places. To start with the German, in 1995 the expenditure of a books was stayed 80 US dollars on the countrary it was a significantly Rose over the period and peacked 95 million in 2005 also it was a decreased in a sometimes in between 1999 and 2003 but after 2003 it was a growth. Moreover, in Austria spending money on a book was less than other three cities it was a less than a 50 US dollar in a 1995 but after the year of 2001 it was a dramatically reach to the highest point then Italy which was more than 60 million respectively The expenditure of a book in a France and Italy was almost the same in the year of 1995 which was around half of million dramatically but after the year of 1997 the expenditure of a book was slightly fall and Peacked 49 million dollar in itely. Furthermore in a france it was a sharply increased over the period and peack 70 US dollar respectively.
The line chart illustrates, the
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