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expenditure of four car companies on advertising in UK in the year 2002

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The Table highlights how much dollars was expanded of car companies on marketing in the UK in 2002 in millions of dollars overall, In the year 2002 the amount of money expanded on radio marketing was identical in the given car companies which was 15 million of dollars there were 4 car companies the highest money expand on TV marketing in UK in 2002 In the case of Renault, it was highest money expand on TV advertising which was 59 million dollars the amount of money expand on press advertisement was the 2nd highest figure in renault with reference to rover it was expand on TV program advertising same trend at Renault.
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on marketing in the UK in 2002 in millions of
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expanded on radio marketing was identical in the
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there were 4 car
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on TV marketing in UK in 2002 In the case of Renault, it was
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on TV advertising which was 59 million
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the amount of
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on press advertisement was the 2nd highest figure in
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on TV program advertising same trend at Renault.

IELTS academic expenditure of four car companies on advertising in UK in the year 2002

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