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The chart illustrates the unemployment rate for urban and rural areas in four quarters, this each quarter shows unemployment in Australia in the year 2012.

The chart illustrates the unemployment rate for urban and rural areas in four quarters, this each quarter shows unemployment in Australia in the year 2012. W5bDe
The chart illustrates the unemployment rate for urban and rural areas in four quarters, this each quarter shows unemployment in Australia in the year 2012. Overall, the rural area's unemployment ratio is very high compared to urban areas at the beginning of the first quarter. Moreover, the urban area's unemployment ratio is increased and rural area's unemployment decreased at the end of the fourth quarter.
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in Australia in the year 2012.

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decreased at the
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IELTS academic The chart illustrates the unemployment rate for urban and rural areas in four quarters, this each quarter shows unemployment in Australia in the year 2012.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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