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The graph shows that the uses of water for agriculture purpose industrial purpose and domestic purpose in given years.

The graph shows that the uses of water for agriculture purpose industrial purpose and domestic purpose in given years. nVwyg
The given line graph indicates the utility of water in the world from three different purposes and the table chart indicates the usage of water in two different countries. It can be apparently seen that water used for agriculture purpose in 1990 was around 500 kms. Utility of water in this purpose remain stable in 1950. Moreover in 1960 around 100 KM of water utilised for agriculture after 1970 uses of water was climb till 2000. Apart from it water used for industrial and domestic purpose such a constant till 1970 after that least kilometre of water used for domestic purpose. Uses of water increased by passing year. Turning towards there was about 176 million population in Brazil in year 2002 the land was irrigated to 26500 km and 359 m water used by per individual. Moreover indain democratic republic Congo water used by per citizen 8 m and hundred km was irrigated. Overall it can be observed that more water utilised in agriculture purpose and most water consumption in Brazil by per person.
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in 1990 was around 500
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was climb till 2000. Apart from it
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increased by passing year. Turning towards there was about 176 million population in Brazil in year 2002 the land
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