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This map shows how a university campus developed from 2010 to present year

This map shows how a university campus developed from 2010 to present year waw8n
Overall, it can be seen from the map that number of accommodation buildings have been increased and the new block are added over the period. In 2010 there were only one student accommodation building in northwest of the campus along the road and parallel to the accommodation, there were some university offices for the faculty. The teaching block was constructed in the north of the lake and the lake was surrounded by a beautiful and big lawn with a student sitting area. In the east of the campus, some shops were constructed and adjacent to it a restaurant was established in order to cater to students. Moreover, one more student accommodation building was made in the west of the university. The second map illustrates that number of student accommodation building has been increased in number so that hostel facilities can be provided to new admissions. The university office has been replaced by a science block to order to add more courses in the university and the teaching block has been reduced, and the art building is reconstructed at the same place. Shops have been demolished and one more student accommodation building is for the students of new departments. However, lawn and sitting areas have been removed and the lake is still present in the center of campus. New shops and offices have been constructed in the place of student accommodation to increase amenities.
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buildings
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new
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are
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added
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In 2010 there were
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one
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building
in northwest of the campus along the road and parallel to the
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, there were
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some
university offices for the faculty. The teaching
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block
was constructed
in the north of the lake and the lake
was surrounded
by a
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beautiful
and
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big
lawn with a
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student
sitting area. In the east of the campus,
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some
shops
were constructed
and adjacent to it a restaurant
was established
in order to cater to
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students
.
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, one more
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student
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accommodation
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building
was made
in the west of the university.

The second map illustrates that number of
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student
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building
has
been increased
in number
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so
that hostel facilities can
be provided
to
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new
admissions. The university office has
been replaced
by a science
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block
to order to
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add
more courses in the university and the teaching
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block
has been
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reduced
, and the art
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building
is reconstructed
at the same place. Shops have
been demolished
and one more
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student
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accommodation
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building
is for the
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students
of
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new
departments.
However
, lawn and sitting areas have
been removed
and the lake is
still
present in the center of campus.
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New
shops and offices have
been constructed
in the place of
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student
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accommodation
to increase amenities.
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