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the graph given below shows money spending on three different items in the Uk from 2000 to 2016

the graph given below shows money spending on three different items in the Uk from 2000 to 2016 Gwm5L

The given line graph demonstrates that how much money was spent on three separate types of food in the United Kingdom. Focusing on cold drinks and tea, the British used their 10% and 20% money for these foods respectively. After which spending for the former increased and went to 35% in the next year while the latter saw a decrease. With regard to Ice cream, in the beginning, about 24 percent of the money had been spent on this category, however, after 2014 this figure rose to 50%. Furthermore, by 2016, the expenditure for ice cream was at its peak, reaching approximately 46 percent. Similarly, other two items popcorn and bread these witnessed a slight fell in popularity, which mean people spend only 12% of the money on these items.

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 line graph demonstrates that how much You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
was spent
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cold
 drinks and tea, the British This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
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 their 10% and 20% You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
 for these foods respectively
. After which spending for the former increased and went to 35% in the next
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saw
 a decrease.

With regard to Ice cream, in the beginning, about 24 percent of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
money
 had been spent
 on this category, however
, after 2014 this figure rose to 50%. Furthermore
, by 2016, the expenditure for ice cream was at its peak, reaching approximately 46 percent. Similarly
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people
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only
 12% of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagewealthpaybillcash
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 on these items. 