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The chart illustrates the total number of trips by children aged 5-12 in a certain country, going to and from school, using varying modes of transport during the year 1990 and 2010

The chart illustrates the total number of trips by children aged 5-12 in a certain country, going to and from school, using varying modes of transport during the year 1990 and 2010 B3n5
The chart illustrates the total number of trips by children aged 5-12 in a certain country, going to and from school, using varying modes of transport during the year 1990 and 2010. In 1990, the children has spent the highest number of trips through walking, garnering almost 12. 2 million trips on the aforementioned year. Following that is the trips by the bus with 7 million, cycling in 6. 1 million, walking and bus with a total of 5. 9 trips and lastly the car with 4. 2 million recorded trips that year. On the other hand, the most used mode of transportation of children, going to and from school, in the year 2010 is through car with 11 million trips. This is then followed by walking with 6 million, taking the bus in 5 million trips, walking and bus in 3 million and cycling accumulating the least number with 2 million recorded trips.
The chart illustrates the total number of
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by children aged 5-12 in a certain country, going to and from school, using varying modes of transport during the year 1990 and 2010. In 1990, the children has spent the highest number of
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through walking, garnering almost 12. 2
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on the aforementioned year. Following
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by the bus with 7
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, cycling in 6. 1
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, walking and bus with a total of 5. 9
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mode of transportation of children, going to and from school, in the year 2010 is through car with 11
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. This is then followed by walking with 6
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, taking the bus in 5
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, walking and bus in 3
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and cycling accumulating the least number with 2
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IELTS academic The chart illustrates the total number of trips by children aged 5-12 in a certain country, going to and from school, using varying modes of transport during the year 1990 and 2010

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