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The chart illustrates the rate of the UK working men and women as teachers in six particular educational types of setting in the year 2010.

The chart illustrates the rate of the UK working men and women as teachers in six particular educational types of setting in the year 2010. jbkGw
The chart illustrates the rate of the UK working men and women as teachers in six particular educational types of setting in the year 2010. Overall, The UK in 2010 saw a larger proportion of female tutors in nursery, primary and secondary school, while Private training institutes and universities were dominated mostly by males. As can be seen from the chart, female teachers far outnumbered other gender and took up approximately 100% of the total number of teachers in Pre-school. Similarly, in Primary school, that number consisted of over 95% and the percentages of male tutors were just under 10% in two locations. In addition to this, in secondary school, the female number was higher than that of males with over 50% and lower than 50% in turn. When comparing both genders in three remain types, the percentage of both gender lecturers in further education settings was the same at the point of 50%. Moreover, University and Private training places saw an outnumbered rate of working men with 70% and nearly 60% respectively. By contrast, female tutors just took up 30% for the former and under 50% for the latter.
The chart illustrates the rate of the UK working
men
and women as teachers in six particular educational types of setting in the year 2010.

Overall
, The UK in 2010
saw
a larger proportion of
female
tutors in nursery, primary and secondary school, while Private training institutes and universities
were dominated
mostly
by males.

As can be
seen
from the chart,
female
teachers far outnumbered other gender and took up approximately 100% of the total number of teachers in
Pre-school
.
Similarly
, in Primary school, that number consisted of over 95% and the percentages of male tutors were
just
under 10% in two locations.
In addition
to this, in secondary school, the
female
number was higher than that of males with over 50% and lower than 50% in turn.

When comparing both genders in three remain types, the percentage of both gender lecturers in
further
education settings was the same at the point of 50%.
Moreover
, University and Private training places
saw
an outnumbered rate of working
men
with 70% and
nearly
60%
respectively
. By contrast,
female
tutors
just
took up 30% for the former and under 50% for the latter.

IELTS academic The chart illustrates the rate of the UK working men and women as teachers in six particular educational types of setting in the year 2010.

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