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The chart illustrates the rate of birth and death in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101.

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The chart illustrates the rate of birth and death in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101. Beginning with the rate of birth in 1901 was steadily increased, then in between the year 1941 and 1961, the birth rate somehow, sharply rose. The rate of birth had a big slight fall in 1981 then rose up again to a slow deciline from 2001 onwards. On the contrary, the rate of death between 1901 and 2001 had a very smooth incline, except for a ver sharp increase, right before 1921. Then after 2001 the rate of death exponentially grew higher then overtakes the rate of Birth in 2061. So, overall, it seems that the birth rate have always overtaken the death rate. Until the year 2041, the reported death has drasticly risen winning over the birth rate. Predicting the graph after 2101 the rate of birth could possibly drop, as well as death rate.
The chart illustrates the
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of
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and death in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101.

Beginning with the
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rate
of
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birth
in 1901 was
steadily
increased, then in between the year 1941 and 1961, the
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rate
somehow,
sharply
rose. The
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of
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birth
had a
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big
slight fall in 1981 then rose up again to a slow
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deciline
from 2001 onwards.

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, the
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of death between 1901 and 2001 had a
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very
smooth incline,
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a
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ver
sharp increase, right
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before
1921. Then after 2001 the
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of death
exponentially
grew
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higher then
overtakes the
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in 2061.

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,
overall
, it seems that the
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birth
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have always overtaken the death
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. Until the year 2041, the reported death has
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drasticly
risen winning over the
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birth
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. Predicting the graph after 2101 the
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of
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could
possibly
drop,
as well
as death
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.

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