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Receiving news in two country

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The shown pie chart gives us information about ways of receiving news in two country. It is easily seen that in Canada most used way is TV however, in Australia accessing online. Moving to the details, in Canada popular way of watching news is TV which covers 40 percent and second way is online which is 4 percent less than TV. The least ones are firstly radio and then print which has 7 percent difference between those two. There is also not specified which covers 3 percent. In Australia, most receiving way is online and after it watching from TV which surrounds 37%. Accessing from print is 7%. Moreover, the lowest is radio and not specified which is 2 percent. In conclusion, in both country Canada and Australia, minimum ones are print, radio and not specified and the highest covered ways of receiving news are both online and TV.

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IELTS academic Receiving news in two country

Academic

American English

4 paragraphs

149 words

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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 7.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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