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The diagram shows how a company called HB Office Recycling recycles unwanted office furniture and equipment from other businesses. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows how a company called HB Office Recycling recycles unwanted office furniture and equipment from other businesses. NVmwb
The diagram outlines how unwanted office items are recycled by a company called HB Office Recycling Ltd. Office furniture that is no longer desired is first collected by a HB representative and transported to the company's main office. From here, the goods enter the sorting phase and it is at this point that the item's priority status is specified. Prioritisation of goods involves separating the furniture into four categories. The first group is for reuse and is called 'Priority 1' whereby furniture is used again by various third-party organisations such as schools and charities. 'Priority 2' provides the opportunity for items to be remanufactured and repaired for use by customers who need second-hand, refurbished or remanufactured furniture. 'Priority 3' sees materials recycled into three categories: plastics, metals and wood. The sorted materials are then transferred to a separate recycling processing centre. Finally, 2% of HB's collections are considered nonrecyclable, ending up in landfill sites. Overall, the entire recycling process allows furniture which would otherwise end up in landfill to be utilised further, thus preventing unnecessary waste. A small proportion of items, however, end their life unable to be reused in any way
The diagram outlines how unwanted

office items
are recycled
by a

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company
called
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HB
Office Recycling

Ltd.

Office
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furniture
that is
no longer

desired is
first
collected by
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a
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HB


representative and transported to

the
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company
's main office. From

here, the
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goods
enter the sorting

phase and it is at this point that the

item's priority status
is specified
.

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Prioritisation
of
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goods
involves

separating the
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furniture
into four

categories. The
first
group is for

reuse and
is called
'Priority 1'

whereby
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furniture
is
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used
again by

various third-party
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organisations


such as schools and charities.

'Priority 2' provides the opportunity

for items to be
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remanufactured
and

repaired for
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use
by customers who

need second-hand, refurbished or
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remanufactured
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furniture
. 'Priority 3'
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sees
materials recycled

into three categories: plastics, metals and wood. The sorted materials are then transferred to a

separate recycling processing
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centre
.
Finally
, 2% of
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HB
's collections
are considered
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nonrecyclable
, ending up in landfill sites.

Overall
, the entire recycling process
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allows
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furniture
which would
otherwise
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end
up in landfill to be

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utilised
further
,
thus
preventing unnecessary waste. A
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small
proportion of items,
however
,
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end
their

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life
unable to
be reused
in any
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way
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IELTS academic The diagram shows how a company called HB Office Recycling recycles unwanted office furniture and equipment from other businesses.

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
191 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
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