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The given two bar graphs illustrates about important reasons related to education of various students with different age factors and as well as the amount of hold up that their employers are given to them. Overall, Almost 80% of the students under the age of 26 are willing to continue their education for their career only, but the people over age of 49 are wanted to pursue their education with their personal interest only. For the people under the age of 26 they are getting up to 65% of their employer support. 80% students under the age of 26 are mostly willing to continue their education for their career purposes only and within the same age 10% of the students are willing to study with their interest. Nearly 70% of the students in the age of 26-29 are interested to continue their education to develop their career and over the age of 49 almost 70% of them wanted to study with their own interest. Coming to their employer hold up nearly 65% of them supporting the people under the age 26 and also they are encouraging within the age of 26-29 and hardly only 35% are keeping up for the age group in between 30-39.
The
given
two bar graphs illustrates about
important
reasons related to
education
of various
students
with
different
age
factors and
as well
as the amount of hold up that their employers are
given
to them.

Overall
, Almost 80% of the
students
under the
age
of 26 are willing to continue their
education
for their career
only
,
but
the
people
over
age
of 49
are wanted
to pursue their
education
with their personal interest
only
. For the
people
under the
age
of 26 they are getting up to 65% of their employer support.

80%
students
under the
age
of 26 are
mostly
willing to continue their
education
for their career purposes
only
and within the same
age
10% of the
students
are willing to study with their interest.
Nearly
70% of the
students
in the
age
of 26-29
are interested
to continue their
education
to develop their career and over the
age
of 49 almost 70% of them wanted to study with their
own
interest. Coming to their employer hold up
nearly
65% of them supporting the
people
under the
age
26 and
also
they are encouraging within the
age
of 26-29 and hardly
only
35% are keeping up for the
age
group in between 30-39.
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IELTS academic student education comparasion

Academic
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3 paragraphs
205 words
6.5
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