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The chart illustrates the amount of money spent on 5 consumers good (cars, computers, books, perfumes and cameras)

Introduction – short intro about the table The chart illustrates the amount of money spent on 5 consumers good (cars, computers, books, perfumes and cameras) in France and the UK in 2010. Units are measured in Pounds Sterling. Overview – list of key features, start always with overall Overall, the expenditures in the UK was higher than that of France. Both the French and the British people spent the most money on cars, while in the UK the least amount of money was spent on perfumes compared to cameras in France. Paragraph A In terms of cars, the UK spent around £450000 on this as opposed to exactly £400000 in France. The expenditures on books in the UK was higher than in France (about £400000 and £3000000 respectively).

Introduction Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
–
 short intro about the table

The chart illustrates the amount of money You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwastedfinisheduseddeadlost
spent
 on 5 consumers This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 (cars, computers, books, perfumes and cameras) in France and the UK in 2010. Units are measured
 in Pounds Sterling.

Overview Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
–
 list of key features, The adverb ‘always’ is usually put before the verb ‘start’.always start
start always
 with overall


Overall
, the expenditures in the UK was higher than that of France. Both the French and the British This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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spent
 the most money on cars, while in the UK the least amount of money was You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwastedfinisheduseddeadlost
spent
 on perfumes compared to cameras in France.

Paragraph A

In terms of cars, the UK You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwastedfinisheduseddeadlost
spent
 around £450000 on this as opposed to exactly £400000 in France. The expenditures on books in the UK was higher than in France (about £400000 and £3000000 respectively
). 