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The charts illustrate the age of population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and their goals for 2050.

The charts illustrate the age of population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and their goals for 2050. In Yemen during 2000 to 2050 the percentage of people who have 0-14 years old reached from 50. 1 percent to 37 percent, although the percentage of people who have 15-59 years old increased dramatically from 46. 3 to 57. 3 percent, thus the percentage of people who have more than 59 years old increased slightly and reached to 5. 7 percent from 3. 6 percent. In the other side, situation in Italy is different. In Italy the percentage of first group of people who have 0-14 years old is fallen slightly from 14. 3 percent to 11. 5 percent, also the percentage of second group is fallen sharply from 61. 6 percent to 46. 2 percent, furthermore the percentage of third group who have more than 59 years old raised and reached to 42. 3 percent. Overall, as the chart shows the future population in Italy and Yemen are different, thus in 2050 the percentage of mid rang age in Yemen is more than Italy.
The charts illustrate the age of population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and their goals for 2050.

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IELTS academic The charts illustrate the age of population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and their goals for 2050.

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