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Given illustration provides information about environmental problems raised by product over its Era. Overall there are six stages in process beginning with planning design finishing with reproduce materials. To begin with opt to necessary materials and they prepare to make and planning design. Then this factory produce materials and energy resources. Following this they manufacture when they ready to produce item. In the subsequent stage this ready product stowage and this products dispart markets and shops. Next this outputs merchant. Following this buyers embrace this product. Finally this products reproduce factors
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illustration provides information about environmental problems raised by
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product
over its Era.
Overall
there are six stages in process beginning with planning design finishing with reproduce materials.

To
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begin
with opt to necessary
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materials and
they prepare to
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make
and planning design. Then this factory produce materials and energy resources. Following this they manufacture when they ready to produce item.

In the subsequent stage this ready
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product
stowage and
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this
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products
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dispart
markets and shops.
Next
this outputs merchant. Following
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this
buyers embrace this
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product
.
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Finally
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this
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products
reproduce
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factors

IELTS academic Write report for the given chart

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
90 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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