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Given illustration provides information about environmental problems raised by product over its Era. Overall there are six stages in process beginning with planning design finishing with reproduce materials. To begin with opt to necessary materials and they prepare to make and planning design. Then this factory produce materials and energy resources. Following this they manufacture when they ready to produce item. In the subsequent stage this ready product stowage and this products dispart markets and shops. Next this outputs merchant. Following this buyers embrace this product. Finally this products reproduce factors

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
Given
 illustration provides information about environmental problems raised by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
product
 over its Era. Overall
 there are six stages in process beginning with planning design finishing with reproduce materials.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with opt to necessary Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).materials, and
materials and
 they prepare to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 and planning design. Then this factory produce materials and energy resources. Following this they manufacture when they ready to produce item.

In the subsequent stage this ready You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
product
 stowage and ‘This’ does not seem to match the plural noun ‘products’. Did you mean “these”?these
this
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products
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dispart
 markets and shops. Next
 this outputs merchant. Following ‘This’ does not seem to match the plural noun ‘buyers’. Did you mean “these”?these
this
 buyers embrace this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
product
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Finally,
Finally
‘This’ does not seem to match the plural noun ‘products’. Did you mean “these”?these
this
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products
 reproduce Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph.factors.factors!factors?factors:factors,factors;
factors