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The chart illustrates the evaluation of four week survey about individuals coffee/ tea purchasing and consuming practice in five Australian cities.

The chart illustrates the evaluation of four week survey about individuals coffee/ tea purchasing and consuming practice in five Australian cities. Overall it is evident that, among the 5 cities, the least common habit is buying fresh coffee. On a closer observation, it is visible that, majority of population of Melbourne, Hobart, Sydney and Brisbane preferred to have a coffee at a café, which results as, Melbourne, Hobart and Sydney with almost similar figures of 62-64% approximately, followed by, Brisbane which is 10 percent less in comparison to other 3 cities but still, amounts to 55%. Conversely, Adelaide’s People opted lowest to drop by a café and the data shared is roughly 49%. Furthermore, the towns which mainly desired to buy instant coffee are Hobart, Brisbane and Adelaide, the percentage range of these three cities are 52-54% tentatively. Whereas, in Melbourne and Sydney the percentage is depicted low of following the practise of buying instant coffee and the percentage represented is identical of both the cities results as between 45% to 48%. On the other hand, the individuals who bought fresh coffee were highly observed in Sydney and Melbourne and the percentage outcome is almost equal which is roughly 44-42%. Consequently, Brisbane and Adelaide have made the least amount of fresh coffee purchase surprisingly the percentage demonstrated is same that is 34%.
The chart illustrates the evaluation of four week
survey
about individuals coffee/ tea purchasing and consuming practice in five Australian
cities
.
Overall
it is evident that, among the 5
cities
, the least common habit is buying fresh coffee.

On a closer observation, it is visible that, majority of population of Melbourne, Hobart, Sydney and Brisbane preferred to have a
coffee
at a café, which results as, Melbourne, Hobart and Sydney with almost similar figures of 62-64% approximately, followed by, Brisbane which is 10 percent less
in comparison
to other 3
cities
but
still
, amounts to 55%.
Conversely
, Adelaide’s
People
opted lowest to drop by a café and the data shared is roughly 49%.
Furthermore
, the towns which
mainly
desired to
buy
instant
coffee
are Hobart, Brisbane and Adelaide, the
percentage
range of these three
cities
are 52-54%
tentatively
. Whereas, in Melbourne and Sydney the
percentage
is depicted
low of following the
practise
of buying instant
coffee
and the
percentage
represented is identical of both the
cities
results as between 45% to 48%.

On the other hand
, the individuals who
bought
fresh
coffee
were
highly
observed in Sydney and Melbourne and the
percentage
outcome is almost equal which is roughly 44-42%.
Consequently
, Brisbane and Adelaide have made the least amount of fresh
coffee
purchase
surprisingly
the
percentage
demonstrated is same
that is
34%.
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