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The first bar chart represents the number of UK tourists visiting the US alongside that of US tourists coming to the UK, whereas the second bar chart illustrates the spending behavior of these groups between 2011 and 2015.

The first bar chart represents the number of UK tourists visiting the US alongside that of US tourists coming to the UK, whereas the second bar chart illustrates the spending behavior of these groups between 2011 and 2015. 3A1gY
The first bar chart represents the number of UK tourists visiting the US alongside that of US tourists coming to the UK, whereas the second bar chart illustrates the spending behavior of these groups between 2011 and 2015. Overall, it is clear that the number of UK visitors to the US, and their total monetary contribution surpass those of their American counterparts coming to the UK. Looking at the first bar chart, one can see that the number of British tourists to the US dipped to a low point of less than three million between 2011 and 2013, before rebounding to a peak of 35 million in 2015. The number of Americans visiting the UK remained relatively stable around the 28 million mark in 2011 and 2012, but it slipped to a low of 25 million in 2013. However, the number reached its highest point of about 32 million in 2015. As for the second chart, evidently, the spending of UK tourists in the US grew gradually between 2011 and 2013, from 38 billion to 40 billion USD. Yet, in the second half of the 5-year period, the figures skyrocketed to slightly less than 6 billion dollars. For US tourists, their spending remained constant around the $29 billion marks in the first two years, before climbing and reaching a pinnacle of around $40 billion by 2015.
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first
bar
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represents the
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number
of UK
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tourists
visiting the US alongside that of US
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tourists
coming to the UK, whereas the second bar
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chart
illustrates the spending behavior of these groups between 2011 and 2015.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that the
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number
of UK visitors to the US, and their total monetary contribution surpass those of their American counterparts coming to the UK.

Looking at the
first
bar
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chart
, one can
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see
that the
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number
of British
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tourists
to the US dipped to a low point of less than three
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million
between 2011 and 2013,
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before
rebounding to a peak of 35
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million
in 2015. The
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number
of Americans visiting the UK remained
relatively
stable around the 28
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million
mark in 2011 and 2012,
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but
it slipped to a low of 25
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million
in 2013.
However
, the
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reached its highest point of about 32
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million
in 2015.

As for the second
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,
evidently
, the spending of UK
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tourists
in the US grew
gradually
between 2011 and 2013, from 38
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billion
to 40
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billion
USD.
Yet
, in the second half of the 5-year period, the figures skyrocketed to
slightly
less than 6
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billion
dollars. For US
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tourists
, their spending remained constant around the $29
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billion
marks in the
first
two years,
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before
climbing and reaching a pinnacle of around $40
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billion
by 2015.
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IELTS academic The first bar chart represents the number of UK tourists visiting the US alongside that of US tourists coming to the UK, whereas the second bar chart illustrates the spending behavior of these groups between 2011 and 2015.

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