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The chart illustrates how many people visited museums per month in 2013.

The chart illustrates how many people visited museums per month in 2013. DYgn7

The chart illustrates how many people visited museums per month in 2013. In general, at the beginning, the British museum managed to attract more and more visitors, whereas, there were upward trends in that of Science museum and Natural History one. After all, the ranking of these figures were unchanged. Looking at the line of British museum, we can see that there was a significant rise in the number of visitors, which reached a peak of 750 people in July. After a month, this figure experienced a considerable decrease to 500, then grew to perfectly 650 in September. Regarding Natural History Museum, the number of visitors was 550 in June 2013. After that, this figure dropped sharply to nearly 400 prior to increasing gradually to above 450 in the last 2 months. In terms of the last destination in this chart- Science Museum, there was a slight downward trend from 400 to exactly 300 in the first 3 months. As a consequence, this figure went through a dramatic rise to 450, which was a bit lower in comparison with Natural History Museum’s result.

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