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The chart illustrates average carbon dioxide emissions per person in four European countries between 1975 and 2015.

The chart illustrates average carbon dioxide emissions per person in four European countries between 1975 and 2015. 1AWXL
The line chart depicts the information about four European countries such as France, Norway, Spain and Greece who emits average carbon dioxide per person, which is measured in metric tonnes between 1975 and 2015. Overall, the amount of carbon dioxide emission was steadily increased in Greece and Spain but, it was decline drastically in France and Norway countries in the given time period. The emissions of carbon dioxide was negligible in 1975 but, it rose significantly and reached at nearly 5 metric tonnes after twenty years. Then, it climbed up to just under 6 metric tonnes in 2005 and then, it remained constant at the period of 2015. Spain was that country from which carbon dioxide emits 4 metric tonnes of energy in 1975. It increased sharply to near about 7. 5 metric tonnes in 2005 and remain stable at the end of the period. Approximately, 8 metric tonnes of carbon dioxide emission in Norway in 1975. After that, it peaked upto 10 metric tonnes in 1985. There were significant decrease observed from 1985 to 2015 and it reached at just over 5 metric tonnes. This emission was decrease dramatically to 7 metric tonnes in 2005 in France. After ten years, there were slight decline represent to nearly 8 metric tonnes.
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carbon
dioxide per person, which
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dioxide
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increased in Greece and Spain
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, it was decline
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in France and Norway countries in the
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of
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dioxide was negligible in 1975
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, it rose
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5 metric tonnes after twenty years. Then, it climbed up to
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under 6 metric tonnes in 2005 and then, it remained constant at the period of 2015. Spain was that country from which
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dioxide emits 4 metric tonnes of energy in 1975. It increased
sharply
to near about 7. 5 metric tonnes in 2005 and remain stable at the
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dioxide
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10 metric tonnes in 1985. There were significant decrease observed from 1985 to 2015 and it reached at
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over 5 metric tonnes. This
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8 metric tonnes.
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