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Caribbean island cruise ship (2010-2017)

Caribbean island cruise ship (2010-2017) ORmqN

In the first seven years the millions of visitors of number of visitors of tourists a Caribbean island on island was higher than visitors staying on cruise ships. but after 2015 visitors staying on cruise ships become an increase more than island in 2017 the graph indicates that total was the most abruptly, with approximately 2. The figure rose to around 2. 5 in 2014 but then they were a dramatically trend until 2016, whole total was higher in the most of the period an given. The rose slightly in 2015, remain continaned the same to growing for remaining constant at this until 2015, there was a marginal a peak of the following after year Overall, cruise ship has always been fairly prosperous with total but visitors staying on island offences committed changed to dropped considerably during the period

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visitors
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visitors
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in 2017 the graph indicates that total was the most abruptly
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but
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The rose slightly
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continaned
 the same to growing for remaining constant

at this until 2015, there was a marginal a peak of the following after year

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, cruise ship has always been fairly
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but
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visitors
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changed
 to dropped considerably
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