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The chart illustrates a parallel of the numbers for tropical deforestation in the years 1990 and 2000.

The chart illustrates a parallel of the numbers for tropical deforestation in the years 1990 and 2000. KwwK9
The chart illustrates a parallel of the numbers for tropical deforestation in the years 1990 and 2000. While the pie chart indicates the factors of deforestation of the rain forest during the period between 2000 and 2005. Overall, Africa, Asia, and South America presented for three regions that accounted for the highest amounts. Meanwhile, the top three reasons that caused deforestation were pasture, small farms, and large farms respectively. As the graph shows, South America had been the region where witnessed tropical rain forest amounts was devastated the most and there was a moderate growth at around 3. 7 million hectares in 1990 and approximately 4. 2 million hectares in the next ten years. Following South America, there was a steady fall in Africa, from around 3. 6 million hectares to about 3. 3 million hectares. Regarding Asia, it can be seen that there was a light rise from just over 2. 5 million to approximately 2. 8 million hectares. For the rest of regions such as Central America, Oceania, and North America, the total of tropical deforestation amounts destroyed was no significant. As regards factors of rain forest deforestation, pasture accounted for the most amounts two- fifths with 40% in total, the following were small farms and large farms with a small minority at around 15- 20%, logging reason made up at around 5-8%.
The chart illustrates a parallel of the numbers for tropical
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deforestation
in the years 1990 and 2000. While the pie chart indicates the factors of
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deforestation
of the rain forest during the period between 2000 and 2005.
Overall
, Africa, Asia, and South America presented for three regions that accounted for the highest
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amounts
. Meanwhile, the top three reasons that caused
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pasture,
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small
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, and large
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respectively
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As the graph
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, South America had been the region where witnessed tropical rain forest
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amounts
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the most and there was a moderate growth at
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3. 7
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hectares in 1990 and approximately 4. 2
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ten years. Following South America, there was a steady fall in Africa, from
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hectares to about 3. 3
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hectares. Regarding Asia, it can be
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that there was a light rise from
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over 2. 5
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to approximately 2. 8
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hectares. For the rest of regions such as Central America, Oceania, and North America, the total of tropical
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deforestation
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amounts
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destroyed
was no significant.

As regards factors of rain forest
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, pasture accounted for the most
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two- fifths with 40% in total, the following were
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with a
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minority at
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IELTS academic The chart illustrates a parallel of the numbers for tropical deforestation in the years 1990 and 2000.

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