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Skip to main content Writing task 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1 Type your essay below and click Submit for evaluation You have 20 minutes to complete Writing task 1. The timer will start when you start typing. The illustrations below depicts an architecture of a wave -energy machine and it's corresponding site. The wave-energy machine is divided into two Chambers comprising the upper and the lower chambers. The upper chamber has direct contact with the atmosphere while the lower chamber is embedded in the sea. Wave flow from the sea is directed into the lower chamber and moves upwards passing through a vent that connects the upper and lower chamber, it is given out into the atmosphere. Concurrently, atmospheric air flows int

Skip to main content Writing task 1 The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. 0AAR1
The illustrations below depicts an architecture of a wave -energy machine and it's corresponding site. The wave-energy machine is divided into two Chambers comprising the upper and the lower chambers. The upper chamber has direct contact with the atmosphere while the lower chamber is embedded in the sea. Wave flow from the sea is directed into the lower chamber and moves upwards passing through a vent that connects the upper and lower chamber, it is given out into the atmosphere. Concurrently, atmospheric air flows into the upper chamber via a vent, moves in a downward motion into the lower chamber and into the water levels. The design of the machine gives room for two Chambers and two venst which allow wave and atmospheric air pass through them simultaneously. The upper chamber is connected to an electricity generator which with the aid of the turbines detects the pressure of air flow. The machine has two installation costs namely: the high and low installation cost. The the low installation cost is responsible to producing small waves - low output while that of high installation cost generates large waves -high outputs.
The illustrations below depicts an architecture of a
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wave
-energy
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machine
and it's corresponding site.

The wave-energy
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machine
is divided
into two
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Chambers
comprising the
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upper
and the lower chambers.

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The
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upper
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chamber
has direct contact with the atmosphere while the lower
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chamber
is embedded
in the sea.

Wave flow from the sea
is directed
into the lower
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chamber
and
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moves
upwards passing through a vent that connects the
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upper
and lower
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chamber
, it is
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given
out into the atmosphere.
Concurrently
, atmospheric air flows into the
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upper
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chamber
via a vent,
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moves
in a downward motion into the lower
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chamber
and into the water levels.

The design of the
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machine
gives room for two
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Chambers
and two
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venst
which
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allow
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wave
and atmospheric air pass through them
simultaneously
. The
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upper
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chamber
is connected
to an electricity generator which with the aid of the turbines detects the pressure of air flow.

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The
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machine
has two installation
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costs
namely
: the high and low installation
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cost
.
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The the
low installation
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cost
is responsible to producing
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small
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waves
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-
low output while that of high installation
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cost
generates large
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waves
-high outputs.
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IELTS academic Skip to main content Writing task 1 The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

Academic
  American English
6 paragraphs
188 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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