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The chart gives information about the quantity of waste created by three companies between 2000 and 2015.

The chart gives information about the quantity of waste created by three companies between 2000 and 2015. 27nM
The chart gives information about the quantity of waste created by three companies between 2000 and 2015. The unit is measured in tonnes. Overall, it can be clearly seen that firm A and firm B exhibit downtrend while the trend of firm is downward. In 2000, the numbers of companies A, B and C stood around 12, 8 and 4, respectively. For a half decade, the figure of firm A dropped moderately to 11. On the other hand, both numbers of companies B and C experienced a significant increase by 2 and 3, respectively. During this period, company A was produced the highest amounts of waste, whereas the company C produced the least. There were an important changes of the trends for a firm B in which the figure dipped relatively from 10 to 3 between 2005 and 2015. In the meanwhile, companies A continued its downward momentum which resulted in decrease by 3. At the same time, the figure of company C rosed sharply from 6 to 10.
The chart gives information about the quantity of waste created by three
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companies
between 2000 and 2015. The unit
is measured
in tonnes.
Overall
, it can be
clearly
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seen
that
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firm
A and
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firm
B exhibit downtrend while the trend of
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firm
is downward.

In 2000, the numbers of
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companies
A, B and C stood around 12, 8 and 4,
respectively
. For a half decade, the figure of
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firm
A dropped
moderately
to 11.
On the other hand
, both numbers of
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companies
B and C experienced a significant increase by 2 and 3,
respectively
. During this period,
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company
A
was produced
the highest amounts of waste, whereas the
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company
C produced the least.

There were an
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important
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changes
of the trends for a
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firm
B in which the figure dipped
relatively
from 10 to 3 between 2005 and 2015. In the meanwhile,
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companies
A continued its downward momentum which resulted in decrease by 3. At the same time, the figure of
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company
C
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rosed
sharply
from 6 to 10.
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IELTS academic The chart gives information about the quantity of waste created by three companies between 2000 and 2015.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
169 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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