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The chart gives information about the number of library books read by boys and girls from 2009 to 2012 at Starmouth School.

The chart gives information about the number of library books read by boys and girls from 2009 to 2012 at Starmouth School. aQ6OV
The chart gives information about the number of library books read by boys and girls at Starmouth School. It shows the trends from 2009 to 2012. The trends followed a similar pattern of the books read by teenagers between 2009 and 2019. In 2009 young man read about 50 books, it was increased slightly to 80 books in 2010 and rose to 100 books in 2011. After that, there was a decrease to 80 books in 2012. In other hand, the number of books read by young lady increased constanly from 2009 to 2012. It started from over 20 books in 2009 and rose to 40 books in 2010 and dramatically rose to 100 boks in 2011. It trends reached a peak in 2012. It was about 140 books read by girls. Generally, there was an upward trends in the books read by young lady. However, there was went up and down trends of books read by young man.
The chart gives information about the number of library
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read
by boys and girls at
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Starmouth
School. It
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the
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trends
from 2009 to 2012.

The
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followed a similar pattern of the
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books
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read
by
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teenagers
between 2009 and 2019. In 2009
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young
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man
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read
about 50
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books
, it
was increased
slightly
to 80
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books
in 2010 and rose to 100
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books
in 2011. After that, there was a decrease to 80
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books
in 2012.

In other hand, the number of
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books
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read
by
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young
lady increased
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constanly
from 2009 to 2012. It
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started
from over 20
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books
in 2009 and rose to 40
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books
in 2010 and
dramatically
rose to 100
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boks
in 2011. It
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reached a peak in 2012.
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It
was about 140
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books
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read
by girls.

Generally
, there was an upward
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trends
in the
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books
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read
by
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young
lady.
However
, there was
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went
up and down
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trends
of
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books
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read
by
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young
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man
.
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IELTS academic The chart gives information about the number of library books read by boys and girls from 2009 to 2012 at Starmouth School.

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