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The chart gives information about export earnings of a country in five categories, while the table illustrates the proportional changes for the same in the years 2015 and 2016.

The chart gives information about export earnings of a country in five categories, while the table illustrates the proportional changes for the same in the years 2015 and 2016. LBOJr
The chart gives information about export earnings of a country in five categories, while the table illustrates the proportional changes for the same in the years 2015 and 2016. Units are measured in dollars for the former and percentage for the latter. Overall, as can be seen from the chart, in both years, a good revenue was generated from exporting Petroleum products by a nation, whereas the sales for Textiles remained at the lowest among all despite increased sales in 2016. It is apparent from the table that the government gained considerable profit from all sources except Gems and Jewellery. To begin with chart, a country earned around $60 billion from petroleum products in a year, the highest among all the other categories. Similarly, Engineering goods had slightly increased and reached around the same figures for export sales of petroleum products. Furthermore, the export earnings for all the categories considerably climbed up in the year 2015 except for Gems and Jewellery which roughly declined to $40 billion. It can be observed from the table, for all the categories, export income rose significantly by an average of 3-5%. Textiles, on the other hand, experienced a drastic incline in the year 2016 to almost 15. 24%. However, the sales only decreased for Gems and Jewellery by 5. 18% in the year 2016.
The chart gives information about
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export
earnings of a country in five
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categories
, while the table illustrates the proportional
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changes
for the same in the years 2015 and 2016. Units
are measured
in dollars for the former and percentage for the latter.

Overall
, as can be
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seen
from the chart, in both years, a
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good
revenue
was generated
from exporting Petroleum products by a nation, whereas the
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sales
for Textiles remained at the lowest among all despite increased
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sales
in 2016. It is apparent from the table that the
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government
gained considerable profit from all sources except Gems and
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Jewellery
.

To
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begin
with chart, a country earned around $60 billion from petroleum products in a
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year
, the highest among all the other
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categories
.
Similarly
, Engineering
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goods
had
slightly
increased and reached around the same figures for
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export
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sales
of petroleum products.
Furthermore
, the
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export
earnings for all the
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categories
considerably
climbed up in the
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year
2015
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except for
Gems and
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Jewellery
which roughly declined to $40 billion.

It can
be observed
from the table, for all the
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categories
,
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export
income rose
significantly
by an average of 3-5%. Textiles,
on the other hand
, experienced a drastic incline in the
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year
2016 to almost 15. 24%.
However
, the
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sales
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only
decreased for Gems and
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Jewellery
by 5. 18% in the
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year
2016.
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IELTS academic The chart gives information about export earnings of a country in five categories, while the table illustrates the proportional changes for the same in the years 2015 and 2016.

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