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The chart given below shows the expenditure involving in publishing a magazine

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The given pie chart shows the different expenses involved in printing a magazine sex types of expenses are shown in the diagram they are editorial content devlopment printing promotion paper binding and transport first off all editprical content devlopment 30 percent this is highest secondly printing costs 24 this difference 7 percent then promotion costs 18 this difference 12 binding costs lastly transportation 6 and paper cost is equal overall editorical content devlopment 30 percent and lowest 6 paper costs
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printing promotion paper binding and transport
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24 this difference 7 percent then promotion
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costs
18 this difference 12 binding
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costs
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transportation 6 and paper
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IELTS academic The chart given below shows the expenditure involving in publishing a magazine

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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