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The chart given about the information of waste disposed by different purposes in sea between 2005 ,2006 and 2007

The bar graph illustrates the amount of waste that was disposed by landfill, burning and dumping in sea methods in a particular nation from 2005 to 2007. Overall, in first two given years the most prefferd way of waste disposal was landfill, whereas in third given year, it was dumping in sea. At a fleeting glance, the maximum (2000) amount of waste that was disposed in 2005 was observed b, but near about 850 million tonnes of waste was disposed in 2007. In 2005 and 2007(900) similar amount of waste was disposed by dumped in sea and landfilling method. Moving further, 1200 million tonnes of waste was disposed in 2006 year by burning method, less than 300 million tonnes of waste was disposed in 2005 by same method.
The bar graph illustrates the amount of
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waste
that
was disposed
by landfill, burning and dumping in sea
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methods
in a particular nation from 2005 to 2007.

Overall
, in
first
two
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years the most prefferd way of
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waste
disposal was landfill, whereas in third
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given
year, it was dumping in sea.

At a fleeting glance, the maximum (2000) amount of
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waste
that
was disposed
in 2005
was observed
b,
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but
near about 850 million tonnes of
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waste
was disposed
in 2007. In 2005 and 2007(900) similar amount of
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waste
was disposed
by dumped in sea and landfilling
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method
. Moving
further
, 1200 million tonnes of
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waste
was disposed
in 2006 year by burning
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method
, less than 300 million tonnes of
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waste
was disposed
in 2005 by same
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.

IELTS academic The chart given about the information of waste disposed by different purposes in sea between 2005, 2006 and 2007

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