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The map show granage park plan since 1920 till now.

The map show granage park plan since 1920 till now. Nwy8j

The map gives an illustration of granage park's plans. As it has changed a lot now than 1920. In 1920, there were two rose gardens along with seats in top and bottom side of the park which have been changed into a big amphitheatre for concerts. As well as, musician's stage is also replaced with this new facility. In the centre of park, there was a fountain but rose garden is taken place now and some seats have been also installed around it. In north eastern side, the cafe is constructed in the place of rose garden. Moreover, the water plant pond has been removed in order to build children's play area. To the south east, the glasshouse has gone and one beautiful water feature is made in this place. Furthermore, one new underground car park enterance has been introduced besides the water feature.

The map gives an illustration of Possible spelling mistake found.grangegran age
granage
 park's plans. As it has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 a lot This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 than 1920.

In 1920, there were two rose gardens along with seats in top and bottom side of the park which have been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 into a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
Possible spelling mistake. 'amphitheatre' is British English.amphitheater
amphitheatre
 for concerts. As well
 as, musician's stage is also
 replaced with this new facility. In the Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 of park, there was a fountain This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 rose garden is taken
 place This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 seats have been also
 installed around it.

In This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.north-easternnortheastern
north eastern
 side, the 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
is constructed
 in the place of rose garden. Moreover
, the water plant pond has been removed
 in order to build children's play area. To the This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.south-eastsoutheast
south east
, the glasshouse has gone and one This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 water feature is made
 in this place. Furthermore
, one new underground car park Possible spelling mistake found.entrance
enterance
 has been introduced
besides
 the water feature. 