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The chart below shows what percentage of their daily intake pf various nutrients average person in usa consumes

The chart below shows what percentage of their daily intake pf various nutrients average person in usa consumes 1kl5N

The above pie chart elucidates the percentage of daily intake of specific Nutrients such as sodium, saturated fat and added sugar in meals and snacks on an average by the people in USA. The sodium is consumed high in the dinner of 43% where as for others lunch, breakfast and snacks are comparatively less as 29%, 14% and same 14% for snacks. The saturated fat is taken in high amount during the dinner as 37% where overall for lunch 26%, breakfast 16% and snacks 16%. The added sugar consumed in snacks is comparatively high when compared to other eating periods and repots a high percentage of 42% and rest follows lunch, dinner and breakfast as 19%, 23% and 16% respectively.

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