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Number of UK tourists to US and US tourists to UK, 2011-2015 and amount spent by UK tourists to US and US tourists to UK, 2011-2015

Number of UK tourists to US and US tourists to UK, 2011-2015 and amount spent by UK tourists to US and US tourists to UK, 2011-2015 0wDMl

The fist bar graph shows the number of UK tourists to US and the number of US tourists to UK, and the second one indicates their spending patterns from 2011 to 2015. According to the first graph, it is clear that there are more UK tourists to US than Us tourists to UK. The number of UK tourists dwindled from 2011 to 2013, and then the number reached the highest point of about 3. 5 million in 2015. On the other hands, US tourisms to UK remained between 2011 and 2012, but it dropped in 2013, it reached around $3. 7 billion. In the second graph, it is obvious that UK tourists in US spent more than US tourists in UK. UK tourists’ spending growth was slow until 2013, and then the growth rise in the last year, totaling 5. 8 billion. US tourists spent was relatively flat before the spending soared remarkably in 2014 and 2015, reaching $4. 0 billion in 2015.

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