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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists In work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting d main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists In work after five years. Bym9
The graph anf the table below reveal some interesting data concerning the typology of employement and the salary earned by Antrhopology graduates after 5 years of job. The most significant fact are that the majority of them was employed in a full-time job and the highest amount of those whom were working in the government sector had the highest wage. Moving to a more detailed analysis, more than a half of the anthropologists found a full-time employement, while the remainder half worked for the 15% part-time, for the 8% full-time in postgrad studies and for a 5% in a combination of part-time job and postgrad studies. The unemployed were a high 12%, and not specific data about the remaining 8% is displayed. As regards for salary, the 50% of government sector workers earned more than 100, 000 dollars compared to a 40% for freelance consultants and a 30% for private companies employee. Interestingly, the lower band wage stood at 5%, 5% and 10% for freelancer, goverment and provate companiws workers respectively.
The graph
anf
the table below reveal
some
interesting data concerning the typology of
employement
and the salary earned by
Antrhopology
graduates after 5 years of job. The most significant fact are that the majority of them
was employed
in a full-time job and the highest amount of those whom were working in the
government
sector had the highest wage.

Moving to a more detailed analysis, more than a half of the anthropologists found a full-time
employement
, while the remainder half worked for the 15% part-time, for the 8% full-time in
postgrad
studies and for a 5% in a combination of part-time job and
postgrad
studies. The unemployed were a high 12%, and not specific data about the remaining 8%
is displayed
.

As regards for salary, the 50% of
government
sector workers earned more than 100, 000 dollars compared to a 40% for freelance consultants and a 30% for private
companies
employee.
Interestingly
, the lower band wage stood at 5%, 5% and 10% for freelancer,
goverment
and
provate
companiws
workers
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists In work after five years.

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