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Pie chart different device to watch television in Canada

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The pie charts bellow show that how people use different device to watch television in Canada in a decade, from 2009 to 2019. From those pie charts, we could find some changes over decade. How most of the people to watch television has changed from conventional TV to flat-screen TV. And the increase of portable device user. Over a decade, people changes from conventional TV to Flat-scren TV on how they prefer to watch television. In 2009, most of the people watch television from conventional TV, with thirty four percent of the population. And it decresed significantly to become four percent, in 2019, became the smallest device to used. Another change that we can find is the increase of using portable device, tablet and mobile phone, from 2009 to 2019. In 2009, people that used mobile phone only fifteen percent of the population and tablet only five percent. However, in 2019, there was increasing population peaple that use portable device. It highly increased to twenty six percent for mobile phone user and nineteen percent for tablet user Overall, thare are changes in how people use device to watch television over decade. People started to move to watch from conventional television to falt screen television. And there are increase of portable user in a decade.
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