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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. M6LQ
The pie chart illustrates the initial occupations of Anthropology students after graduation, while table depicts information about their income levels after five years. Looking from overall perspective, it is apperant that, most receny year graduates took full time positions, whereas the lowest percentage belong to the part-time work together with higher educational degree. A total of 52 % of graduates were full-time worker, compared to 15% of students who works as a part time employee. However this is followed by unemployed students which is equal to 12% and percentage of graduates simulituensly study and work as part- time stand at only 5%. Turning to the table, freelance consultants were employed in upper pay scales and table record that 80% of them making a salary 75. 000$ and only one fifth of them was paid below the 75. 000$. Meanwhile half of the federal workers earned more than 100. 000$, while 30% of them were in the 75. 000 - 99. 999$ range and rest of percentage receive a salary of 50. 000$ and lower. Lastly, 10% of private industry employee earn teh lowest wage and the 35% of them made $50, 000 to $74, 999 which highest proportions among other types of salaries. Only 55% of workers in private companies earned more than $75, 000.
The pie chart illustrates the initial occupations of Anthropology students after graduation, while table depicts information about their income levels after five years.

Looking from
overall
perspective, it is
apperant
that, most
receny
year graduates took full time positions, whereas the lowest percentage belong to the part-time work together with higher educational degree.

A total of 52 % of graduates were full-time worker, compared to 15% of students who works as a
part time
employee.
However
this
is followed
by unemployed students which is equal to 12% and percentage of graduates
simulituensly
study and work as part- time stand at
only
5%.

Turning to the table, freelance consultants
were employed
in upper pay scales and table record that 80% of them making a salary 75.
000$
and
only
one fifth of them
was paid
below the 75.
000$
.
Meanwhile
half of the federal workers earned more than 100.
000$
, while 30% of them were in the 75.
000 - 99
.
999$
range and rest of percentage receive a salary of 50.
000$
and lower.
Lastly
, 10% of
private industry
employee earn
teh
lowest
wage and the 35% of them made $50, 000 to $74, 999 which
highest
proportions among other types of salaries.
Only
55% of workers in private
companies
earned more than $75, 000.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

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