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The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 216. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compares with 2015

The provided graph illustrated the cost of exports of one country in different parts in between 2015 and 2016 and the provided table assumed the proportion in each parts in 2016 similar and different within 2016. Overall, after analyzing the provided table and graph, it can be assumed that there are many changes, While the export earning from petroleum products was the highest value in 2015 and 2016, textiles experienced a significant increase in 2016 comparing to 2015. There are a particular increase around 60 $ in billions in the cost of petroleum products over 2015 and 2016, and engineered products cost recorded approximately 60 $ billions which are similar to the petroleum products in 2015 and 2016. In similar terms agricultural goods within 2015 and 2016 cost 30 $ billions; however, they are changes in slightly sour by. 081 %. Finally, the only goods which had recorded a drastic decrease by 5. 18 % from 2015 till 2016 was gems and jewelry
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parts in between 2015 and 2016 and the provided table assumed the proportion in each
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, While the export earning from petroleum
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was the highest value in 2015 and 2016, textiles experienced a significant increase in 2016 comparing to 2015.

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60 $
in billions in the
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of petroleum
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products
over 2015 and 2016, and engineered
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products
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recorded approximately
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60 $
billions which are similar to the petroleum
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products
in 2015 and 2016.

In similar terms agricultural
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within 2015 and 2016
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30 $
billions;
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sour by. 081 %.

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, the
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which had recorded a drastic decrease by 5. 18 % from 2015 till 2016 was gems and jewelry
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 216. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compares with 2015

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