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The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentages change in each category of exports in 2016 with 2015

Writing Task 1 the value of one country’s exports in different categories during 2015 and 2016 were represented by using the bar chart, while the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015 were illustrated by using the table. The bar chart for both 2015 and 2016 which represents the exports of 5 objects including textiles, engineered goods, gems and jewellery, agricultural products, and petroleum production. On top of that the problem also provides with an information of percentage change in values for all 5 objects within 2015 and 2016. It can be inferred from the table that during 2016 shows us growth for export earnings of all objects except for Gems and jewellery, which were decreased over 5. 18%, therefore, the amount of export earnings of Gems and jewellery from 2016 were lower than 2015. On the other hand, all the other 4 objects increased when compared 2016 with 2015. Besides, textiles were the one that increased the most comparing to other 3 objects that also increased. During 2015, it has the exports earnings in between 20 billions and 30 billions, while the 2016’s exports earnings has over 30 billions, so It increased over 15. 24%. Next, Engineered goods can be observed from the graph that it’s the second most growth in percentage change in values. Over 8. 4% growth comparing from 2015 to 2016. During 2015 its export earnings has a value in between 50 billions and 60 billions, while the 2016’s one has more than 60 millions placing Engineered goods 2nd as the most growth in percentage change value. Overall, we can see country’s export earnings has been doing excellent on exporting all 5 objects, 4 out of 5 objects showed us a percentage growth of more than 0. 5% when it’s compared from 2015 and 2016. However, the same can’t be said for Gems and jewellery, because it’s the only one that decreased in its percentage value when compared from 2015 to 2016.
Writing Task 1

the
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value
of one country’s
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exports
in
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different
categories during 2015 and 2016
were represented
by using the bar chart, while the
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percentage
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change
in each category of
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exports
in 2016 compared with 2015
were illustrated
by using the table.

The bar chart for both 2015 and 2016 which represents the
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exports
of 5
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objects
including textiles, engineered
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goods
,
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gems
and
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jewellery
, agricultural products, and petroleum production.
On top of that
the problem
also
provides with an information of
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percentage
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change
in values for all 5
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objects
within 2015 and 2016.

It can
be inferred
from the table that during 2016
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shows
us
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growth
for
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export
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earnings
of all
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objects
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except for
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Gems
and
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jewellery
, which
were decreased
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over
5. 18%,
therefore
, the amount of
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export
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earnings
of
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Gems
and
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jewellery
from 2016 were lower than 2015.
On the other hand
, all the other 4
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objects
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increased
when compared 2016 with 2015.

Besides
, textiles were the one that
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increased
the most comparing to other 3
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objects
that
also
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increased
. During 2015, it has the
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exports
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earnings
in between 20
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billions
and 30
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billions
, while the 2016’s
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exports
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earnings
has
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over
30
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billions
,
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so
It
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increased
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over
15. 24%.

Next
, Engineered
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goods
can
be observed
from the graph that it’s the second most
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growth
in
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percentage
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change
in values.
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Over
8. 4%
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growth
comparing from 2015 to 2016. During 2015 its
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export
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earnings
has a
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value
in between 50
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billions
and 60
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billions
, while the 2016’s one has more than 60 millions placing Engineered
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goods
2nd as the most
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growth
in
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percentage
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change
value.

Overall
, we can
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see
country’s
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export
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earnings
has been doing excellent on exporting all 5
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objects
, 4 out of 5
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objects
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showed
us a
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percentage
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growth
of more than 0. 5% when it’s compared from 2015 and 2016.
However
, the same can’t
be said
for
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Gems
and
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jewellery
,
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because
it’s the
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only
one that decreased in its
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percentage
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value
when compared from 2015 to 2016.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentages change in each category of exports in 2016 with 2015

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  American English
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