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The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

The bar chart compares the export revenue in five different categories of products in the years 2015 and 2016. The table gives the information about the proportion change in these six categories during these two years. Overall, petroleum products and engineered goods were the main export categories in both 2015 and 2016. We can also see that earning form textiles had the highest increase in 2016 compared with 2015. Most of the export revenue was earned form petroleum products in 2015 and 2016, with over 60 billions. The second important source of earnings was engineered goods at around 55 billions in 2015 and 60 billions in 2016. While earnings from textiles were the lowest, with only half of that from petroleum products. The figures for textiles and engineered goods experienced a higher increase, rising by 15. 24% and 8. 5%. By contrast, the percentage change in values of gems and jewelling decreased by 5. 18%. And earnings from agricultural and petroleum products were remained stable.
The bar chart compares the export revenue in five
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in the years 2015 and 2016. The table gives the information about the proportion
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in these six categories during these two years.

Overall
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petroleum
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products
and engineered
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goods
were the main export categories in both 2015 and 2016. We can
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that
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form textiles had the highest increase in 2016 compared with 2015.

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petroleum
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products
in 2015 and 2016, with over 60 billions. The second
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important
source of
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earnings
was engineered
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goods
at around 55 billions in 2015 and 60 billions in 2016. While
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earnings
from textiles were the lowest, with
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half of that from
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petroleum
products.

The figures for textiles and engineered
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goods
experienced a higher increase, rising by 15. 24% and 8. 5%. By contrast, the percentage
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change
in values of gems and jewelling decreased by 5. 18%. And
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from agricultural and
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petroleum
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were remained
stable.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

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