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chart below shows the proportion of male and female students studying six art-related subjects at a UK university in 2011.

The given bar graph illustrates information about the six subjects which were choosed by woman and men in the United Kingdom during 2014. Overall, it can be clearly seen that both sexes more interested in English language and literature sudject, whereas male students less interest in philosophy and female in history and archaeology. In begin with, the participation in English test and literature subject were almost 250 students by both sexes. The number of male and female who interested in linguistics 180 and240, respectively. The figure of art and design subject was near about 175 of males and 150of females in 2014. Moving further, the participation of girls in philosophy was more than girls at150 and 50, respectively. The number of males who attend communication and media studio class was above 200 against females were almost250 in 2014
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in the United Kingdom during 2014.

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that both sexes more interested in English language and literature
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, whereas male students less interest in philosophy and
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in history and archaeology.

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with, the participation in English
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and literature subject were almost 250 students by both sexes. The number of male and
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who interested in linguistics 180 and240,
respectively
. The figure of art and design subject was near about 175 of
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males
and 150of
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females
in 2014.

Moving
further
, the participation of girls in philosophy was more than girls at150 and 50,
respectively
. The number of
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males
who attend communication and media studio
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was above 200 against
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were almost250 in 2014
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IELTS academic chart below shows the proportion of male and female students studying six art-related subjects at a UK university in 2011.

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