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the chart below shows the value od one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016.The table shows the preventage vhange in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015

The following chart illustrates the worth dof goods in a variety of categories a nation exported in one year period, namely form 2015 to 2016. The table presents the numbers of chamge in different categories of expored of 2016 in comparizon with 2015. Overall, each category reached a high, expect the category of gems and jellewery wich had an downwars trend. To begin with, the precentage of textiles uplifted with 15. 24 precent, reaching 31 billions. The category with the second highest increase was the one with engineering goods. Although in 2015 was in a pretty good stage between 50 and 60 billions, in 2016 it ended up just above 60 billions with a rose of 8. 5 precent. Following, the petroleum products had a change of increase with 3 precent and remained with the highest worth around 63 billion dollars. Agricultural products wend up with only 0. 81 precent wich makes it the category with the lowest increase. While all categories had an upward trend gems and jellewery's worth dropped at 40 billions with a decrease of 5. 18 precent
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IELTS academic the chart below shows the value od one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the preventage vhange in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015

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