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A chart describing how a hydroelectric power station generates electricity

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The diagram shows the process through which hydroelectric power stations are used to generate electricity. The power station works differently based on the time of the day. During the day, the river water flows in a water reservoir which is located at a higher altitude relative to the power station. The water is stored there using a dam gate which is lifted during the during, letting the river water flow downstream. The water, with the force generated from flowing downstream, turns the reversible turbines that are located below the power station. The spinning turbines generate electricity which is then connected to power lines that connect to the national grid. The water is directed into a low-level reservoir after turning the turbines and stored there till night. During the night, the generator pumps the water from the low reservoir to the high reservoir using the reversible turbines rotating in the opposite direction and the power station's generator. The dam in the high-level reservoir is then closed to store the water until the day. The process is repeated every day and night to generate electricity.
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the process through which hydroelectric
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power
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stations
are
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used
to generate electricity. The
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power
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station
works
differently
based on the time of the day. During the day, the river
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water
flows in a
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water
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reservoir
which
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at a higher altitude relative to the
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power
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station
. The
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water
is stored
there using a dam gate which
is lifted
during the during, letting the river
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water
flow downstream. The
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water
, with the force generated from flowing downstream, turns the reversible
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turbines
that
are located
below the
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power
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station
.
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The
spinning
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turbines
generate electricity which is then connected to
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power
lines that connect to the national grid.
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The
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water
is directed
into a low-level
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reservoir
after turning the
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turbines
and stored there till night. During the night, the generator pumps the
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water
from the low
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reservoir
to the high
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reservoir
using the reversible
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turbines
rotating in the opposite direction and the
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power
station's generator. The dam in the high-level
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reservoir
is then closed to store the
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water
until the day. The process
is repeated
every day and night to generate electricity.
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IELTS academic A chart describing how a hydroelectric power station generates electricity

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