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Inflow of foreign workers into Australia

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The bar chart illustrates the inflow of foreign workers in Australia in the time period of 1992-2001. In the year 1992, it was an era when there was a rush of numerous permanent residents(about 40) in Australia. However, at that time there were very few temporary workers(precisely 15). Alternatively, in the next year, the graph prototype is same just the catch is, life long people are 22 and guest residents are 15. Year 1994 was a little bit crunchy as there were less setteling community and more visitors. 1995 and 1996 are almost same years with a maintained graph of higher residential groups and lower shot gap employees. 1997 was a year of drastic changes. There were reduced pioneers and increased short term colleagues. over the years the graph goes steadily increasing and by the end of the year (2001) there were not so much colonizers as compared to moving community in Australia. Overall the graph depicts that there was a noticeable change throughout the year 1992 to 2001 between the permanent settlers and temporary workers.

The bar chart illustrates the inflow of foreign workers in Australia in the time period of 1992-2001.

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 15). Alternatively
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