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The chart below shows the type of media different age groups used to Follow news and current affairs In Canada in 2013. Summarise the Information by selecting and reporting the main Features,and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart depicts tha differnt media resources used by canadian people in 2013. Overall, it can be clearly understood that choices of people vary according to the age group and also from type of media resources. Firstly, from the age group 15 to 34 years, internet was the most favourite one almost 90% of the people and then followed by television(60%), newspaper(40%), radio(approximately 45%) and in the end magazines(10%). Percent of people reading magazines is very less as compare to others. The people between 35 to 54 years old, only 20% people read magazines, it is very less after the people from 15-34. In this age group, most of the people used television as the best media resource after that, internet, radio and newspaper. Pupils range above 55 and higher, engaged in watching television most, with less focus on reading magazines. They are having highest percentage of watching television than any other.

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