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The chart below shows the total sales value by product category in one particular store, in a three-year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the total sales value by product category in one particular store, in a three-year period. GlG72
The bar chart illustrates the yearly profit by four different products of a store from 2010 to 2012. Overall, the sales values of three product categories increased, and only the figure for shampoos was less than at the beginning. Meanwhile, a majority of sales value was made by soaps and handwash. As can be seen in the graph, soaps and handwash and shower gels experienced a gradual rise. In 2010, their proportions were approximately 150000$ and 75000$, respectively. They both saw an increase of more than 20000$ in the next year. Then, shower gels whose sales rate continued to go up to 120000$, while the turnover from soaps and handwash increased slightly and recorded at over 180000$ in 2012. In 2010, there was an almost equal in the values of shampoos and hair conditioners, with 70000$. The proportion of shampoos experienced a considerable rise, before falling rapidly, and remained only 60000$ at the end, By contrast, there were less customer buying hair conditioners in 2011, however, this figure grew significantly to nearly 80000$ in the last year of the period.
The bar chart illustrates the yearly profit by four
different
products of a store from 2010 to 2012.

Overall
, the sales values of three product categories increased, and
only
the figure for shampoos was less than at the beginning. Meanwhile, a majority of sales value
was made
by soaps and
handwash
.

As can be
seen
in the graph, soaps and
handwash
and shower gels experienced a gradual rise. In 2010, their proportions were approximately
150000$
and
75000$
,
respectively
. They both
saw
an increase of more than
20000$
in the
next
year. Then, shower gels whose sales rate continued to go up to
120000$
, while the turnover from soaps and
handwash
increased
slightly
and recorded at over
180000$
in 2012.

In 2010, there was an almost equal in the values of shampoos and hair conditioners, with
70000$
. The proportion of shampoos experienced a considerable rise,
before
falling
rapidly
, and remained
only
60000$
at the
end
, By contrast, there were less customer buying hair conditioners in 2011,
however
, this figure grew
significantly
to
nearly
80000$
in the last year of the period.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the total sales value by product category in one particular store, in a three-year period.

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