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The chart below shows the top 10 you try for the production and consumption of electricity In 3016. summarize and report the main features of the graph and do the comparison where necessary.

The chart below shows the top 10 you try for the production and consumption of electricity In 3016. summarize and report the main features of the graph and do the comparison where necessary. qLGkD
The chart below compares the top ten countries in terms of production and usage of electricity in the year 2015. Overall, China and U. S are the two top contenders that produce as well as consume large amounts of electricity. On the other hand, Germany and Korea are the last two countries in this race. According to the chart, China makes 5398 billion Kilowatt-hour of electricity with an approximately equal amount of electricity being used. Next to China, the United States produces and consumes less electricity as compared to China, although their manufacturing and expenditure of electricity stay about the same. It can be seen that in Russia, Japan, France, Brazil, Germany, and Korea the amount of electricity produced doesn't have much difference from its utilization. On the other hand, in India, and Canada, which are in 5th and 6th rank, the volume of electricity consumed is much more, than electricity manufactured, if compared with the rest of the 8 countries.
The chart below compares the top ten countries in terms of production and usage of
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electricity
in the year 2015.

Overall
, China and U. S are the two top contenders that produce
as well
as consume large amounts of
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electricity
.
On the other hand
, Germany and Korea are the last two countries in this race.

According to the chart, China
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makes
5398 billion
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Kilowatt-hour
of
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electricity
with an approximately equal amount of
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electricity
being
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used
.
Next
to China, the United States produces and consumes less
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electricity
as compared to China, although their manufacturing and expenditure of
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electricity
stay about the same.

It can be
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seen
that in Russia, Japan, France, Brazil, Germany, and Korea the amount of
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electricity
produced doesn't have much difference from its utilization.
On the other hand
, in India, and Canada, which are in 5th and 6th rank, the volume of
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electricity
consumed is much more, than
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electricity
manufactured, if compared with the rest of the 8 countries.
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