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The chart below shows how fish canning is done.

The chart below shows how fish canning is done. NmXyN

Various steps involved in the fish canning process are sequenced in the given flow chart. Of the fifteen step process, the first step is trawling for fish in the water bodies. The fishes which are caught are immediately frozen to a temperature of -18 c. As the fishing vessel reaches the harbor, fishes are unloaded and weighed. For the processes of caudal fins detachment, descaling and degutting, these fishes are thawed. The prepared fishes are cooked in steam and allowed to cool for the purpose of filleting. After being cut into smaller pieces, it is filled in a can in which brine, water or oil is added. Then after the can is sealed airtight and sterilized. The post-sterilized cans are labelled according to the type of fish which is canned. It is moved to the storage section and despatched as per the demand. Overall, the process of fish canning has several stages from fishing to despatching for sales.

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process
are sequenced
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given
 flow chart.

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process
, the first
 step is trawling for fish in the water bodies. The fishes which are caught
 are immediately frozen to a temperature of -18 c. As the fishing vessel reaches the harbor, fishes are unloaded
 and weighed. For the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
processes
 of caudal Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean "fins'" or "fin's"?fins'fin's
fins
 detachment, descaling and Possible spelling mistake found.debutingdeductingbegettingguttingrebuttingdeputing
degutting
, these fishes are thawed
. The prepared fishes are cooked
 in steam and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
allowed
 to cool for the purpose of filleting. After being This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 into smaller pieces, it is filled
 in a can in which brine, water or oil is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
. Then after the can is sealed
 airtight and sterilized. The post-sterilized cans are labelled
 according to the type of fish which is canned
. It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to the storage section and despatched as per the demand.

Overall
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentcasetechniqueproceedingcoursemeans
process
 of fish canning has several stages from fishing to despatching for sales. 